Thursday, 7 May 2020

Remote Learning - Writing

This week our Writing focused on describing using 'Show Don't Tell'. We are building up to writing our own Narratives, this week we learnt how to describe emotions without telling the reader. Have a read of Isobel's amazing 'Show Don't Tell' writing, can you guess the emotion Isobel is describing?

She stood with her fists clenched and her arms straight down. She narrowed her eyes and glared at me then shouted!!! As loud as she could, her eyes looked like they were about to pop out. As her teeth and fists clenched and eyes narrowed then her face started to screw up and her cheeks went red! She was stomping her feet like an elephant. As she was stomping around me, I knew that I had done something bad. Then she stomped up the stairs and closed the door with a loud slam. She was stomping in her room, then she came down the stirs not stomping her feet but still red faced.

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