Remote Learning - Writing

This week we were learning how to use adjectives to make our writing interesting for our reader. Isobel did an amazing job of conveying emotion through her writing.

I am sitting in the sun sollem and sad.The sun is going down in to the salty sea. It is hot on the box, not cold like the sea.

I am about to melt .I feel lonely no one is around.I sit in my driveway alone so sad about to break into pieces.

I feel little and not important also feeling like i am no one.I am big on the outside but small on the inside.

I  hear cars on the road  passing by. I am sat there all alone by myself. Mum calls me in for diner. 

I say I am going to stay out here a little bit longer, you can start. I sit on the box in the sun a little bit longer...