Wednesday, 22 April 2020

Remote Learning - Writing

This week in writing we were learning about Adjectives and how to use them in our writing. Have a read of this amazing piece of writing that Ava wrote this week. Can you find all the adjectives she used?




A slumped and lonely little red head boy was sitting on a brown box with his tiny blue teddy. He was sitting in his big garage, looking out at the Autumn colours longing to go on a walk to his favourite place in Colourville. Where all the Autumn leaves fell down first.  He couldn't go out because he was in lock down. It was so boring in lock down no friends, no walks, no play dates, no sleepovers all you could do is stay at home and try and have fun but when the little boy tried to have fun it just did not  work. He just wanted to have fun not try to have fun. All he dreamed about was being back with his fun friends. Some of his friends had siblings but the little red hair boy didn't so he was as lonely as ever.

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