Slow Writing

Each week we craft a piece of writing for our Home Learning, this week the task was 'slow writing'. For this we write only 4 sentences but each sentence must contain a set word or piece of punctuation. Here are two amazing examples from Olivia and Elodie.

Suddenly there was a loud bang! A noisy blur of grey  stampeded through the Polk-a-dotted living room. They came like great logs tumbling down a rapid - unstoppable. Why were these elephants here? Did they come from the zoo?

By Elodie

Finally we made it to the beach after lots of rainy days. I raced out to my light green bodyboard like a really excited puppy. My Uncle was being ridiculous splashing me with water. “Why does he always do that?” I Moaned
By Olivia